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Love is like the wind, your life is spinning just like spring has sprun, yet voices lie there, and sing the saddest song. lies lies lies. are what they seem to be, and you soon find out, there will never be a you and me.

Love is like the rain, it splashes down onto the ground in a gracelful way, some might say. It sings the tune, the tune of love, yet gets in peoples way, and seems to missbehave. What does this mean? Will I ever see the rain again? Or will I just be outside, burning with the pain?

Love is like the ocean, it moves swiftly, and never backs down. It twists and turns, but never stops. And always seems to make the mark. But as it sings, it leaves its ways. And parts into one, while the other goes away.
You must be dreamy for me to think.
Poetry (c) by me.
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Klairixia Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009   Traditional Artist
that poem came to me into a sad, but right time...ur right. nice poem, it kinda made me cry..
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clicktoexit Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009
Ahh, sorry if it made you cry. And thanks, I was having trouble with my ex when I wrote this. :1
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Klairixia Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009   Traditional Artist
i getcha, we all have our problems, kinda the same situation here, but take off the ex
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clicktoexit Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009
yeah, but sometimes those problems can repair other problems.
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Klairixia Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009   Traditional Artist
i guess ur right about that, well, too hard to explain, long story. its good to read things like this sometimes
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